Water Bottle Notes

Notes from class from the Water Bottle Poster critics:

Skye: Stop using plastic bottles is the message, uses a key to show the impact, really good, responsible about plagerism, don't re-invent the wheel, draw inspiration, being clever not a cop-out, end result really aesthetically pleasing, nice to look at, 60% form and 40% function.

Annabel: Consequences comes from convenience, saying alot clearly without much, reasonably free, balanced well between bottle and type, does it without trying through colour, straight forward, strong message, great all round, hierarchy is dead set, 50/50 form and function.

Me: Simple, straight to the point, strong doesn't show weakness, harmonious, 60% function and 40% form.

Michelle: Literally straight forward, gets the message across, does the job, safe, 70% function and 30% form.

Mitchell: Artistic feel, serious message said differently, shapes and feels greats needs organisation, too complex.

Chris: halfway there, fairly unattractive, the idea is good but ineffective, message is more important, 60% form and 40% function.

Jules: Needs more progression, really good aesthetic elements but needed a stronger message. Awesome idea.

Nicole: focal point is "right" make the audience curious, type based, looks good its not unattractive, message is great put forward in a serious light, a problem without a solution, strong idea/piece very bold, experimental.